Hi Elsie, I love your topic as I
think it is very relevant in today's world. I like the gifs, they add something
new rather than just videos or pictures. I like that you acknowledged that you
have no personal experience as well as the fact that you say this is your
thoughts, and no one else’s. Your quotes seem very relevant and help in
understanding what a beauty pageant truly is as what is described as purely on
physical attractiveness. I agree with above that although these are your
thoughts, i can’t see a clear choice on what you think of beauty pageants.
Other that that, I can't wait to see the final product.
Hi Jack
I like that your blog is very factual and you clearly
know your stuff and have done a decent amount of research. I can appreciate why
you chose this topic because it is quite relevant in today's world. I like that
you have broken it down, as it makes it a lot easier to grasp what I am
reading. The sub-titles make it very clear as well. All in all, very good and i
can't wait to see the final product.
Hi Alex,
I like your topic as it is similar to mine. I
can appreciate what angle you are coming from :) I believe that your topic is
also very relevant in todays world and it will keep people interested as well
as wanting more. I like that you have also broken down the topical points and how
we know was are going to be in your posts in the future. I also agree with what
you are saying :)
Hi Nick, I like your topic. It's so different and original but still so
important it todays world. Your blog is very important and made me realise that
this is a very important subject. I like that you have made it very clear your
stance on this because it makes it easier to read. Personally I didn't really
know about fracking so its great to read something that is very informative so
I get the general gist of things. Also the video and diagrams are a great
addition to a great blog. Your layout is also very well done.
I think you have chosen a very intelligent and original topic Natasha :)
I like your introduction as it is simple and effective and gets to the point. I
can't wait to read the rest of your posts!
I agree with Natasha, I want
to see where you take your argument. I definitely know where I would go with
it, but it should be interesting to see what side you take. Personally, I
always go to it, but I do always check with other sources like you have stated.
Unless I was 100 percent sure that I knew it was right. I also think it is a
refreshing topic so good on you :)
Hi Nicola, I like your topic as it is original and one
that is not that common. Great to see you taking a big interest in it. I like
how your blog gives off a positive vibe with the colours and picture of all the
children and things like that. You seem to know a lot about the subject which
shows with the magnitude of information you have provided.
Hi Shelby, I totally respect your choice in topic and
agree with everything you have said so far. You have a lot of information about
the tests themselves but I'm wondering if this is relevant to your argument as
opposed to the results of the test. I agree with Julia's above comment about
your outlook but maybe its needs more solid debate rather than just straight
information. Hope this helps you :)
Patrick Scott12 May 2013 00:53
Hi Ashley, I love your topic. It is very original and im glad someone has decided to tackle this topic. You make several good points and I especially like your post "How not to be raped." I believe that really will help people who read this blog if they are to be attacked. Also the evidence you have provided regarding the 16 year old raping case, really helps in supporting your choice. Your conclusion I also one hundred percent agree with your conclusion. It is the same conclusion I would come to. All in all, a very informative blog and you should be happy with your end result :)
Hi Rebecca. I like your refreshing choice in topic. I believe its one that needs to be tackled head on and so far you are doing a great job. I know you've had problems with your URL and it deleting itself but so far you are doing a good job. Hopefully you get it done. I'm sure you've received an extension so everything will work out. So far you're doing great so don't worry about anyting! :)
